ben comes at you hard and fast in this one, but he’s heard that you like it that way! [...]
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Chapter 1 Here Chapter 2 Here Chapter III The next time he came back, the ship had returned, and the navy-man was nowhere in sight, though Johnny didn’t stick around long enough to investigate. On his way back across the top of the cliffs, he came across an old rambler, who approached [...] Long takes are a bit like long sentences in the fact that the can sometimes really ruin the pace of whatever you are writing and unless a lot of attention is given to them they can look stupid but they are also a great weapon to really build suspense unless you don’t run out of f…. [...] |
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